Posted by: julie gonzalez | November 18, 2011

Kyle’s Poem

This poem was written by my still unpublished character, Kyle, from a story called ASHES, ASHES, WE ALL FALL DOWN.  Some of his other poems are featured earlier in this blog (Aug. 6, 2010 and May 16, 2010).

Fingertips

Graze my flesh

Slice it so it spills crimson

On sand

Slips into the sea

With a last gasp

And a smile


Responses

  1. Kyle is very much alive…

  2. Tragically, Kyle is a bit of a psycho. He likes fire. Dangerously so.

  3. Nice poem. Kyle is just a misguided kid. Er, joking.

  4. Funny. Aren’t we all just misguided kids?

  5. Very informative post.Really thank you! Will read on…


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